The Raft — Context and Discussion

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Authors: Dawson, Coningsby, 1883-1959, Lowell, Orson, 1871-1956 [Illustrator] Digital Source: Project Gutenberg Gutenberg Release Year: 2015 First Publication Year: Not confirmed

Key Word: Man-woman relationships -- Fiction; Marriage -- Fiction Target Reader: Readers of public-domain and historical texts

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Coningsby Dawson's 1914 novel uses a raft as a central metaphor for precarious love and marriage, shifting between Oxford drawing-rooms, a thatched cottage, and London streets. The narrative moves through playful banter, poetic interludes, and sudden emotional turns, with recurring images of water, shadows, and winged things.

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s it that no man had chosen them? Gazing at their own reflections, they would tell themselves that they were not bad-looking--Jehane with her cloudy brown eyes and gipsy mane of night-black hair, Nan all blue and flaxen and fluffy. The years slipped by. Where was he in the world?

For eight years, since she was seventeen, Jehane had never ceased watching. Every New Year and birthday she had whispered to herself, “Perhaps, by this time next year he will have come.” Marriage seemed to her the escape to every happiness.

Now that she was twenty-five she grew desperate; from now on, with every day, her chance of being one of the chosen would diminish. As she expressed it to Nan, “We're two girls adrift on a raft and we can't swim. Over there's the land of marriage with all the little children, the homes and the husbands; we've no means of getting to it. Unless some of the men see us and put off in boats to our rescue, we'll be caught in the current of the years and swept out into the hunger of mid-ocean. But they're too busy to notice us. Oh, dear!”

When Jehane spoke like this Nan would laugh; except for Jehane, no such thoughts would have entered her head. They didn't worry her when she was with her rector father at Cassingland, occupied with her quiet round of village-duties. In her heart of hearts she believed that life was planned by an unescapable Providence. Her placid philosophy irritated Jehane. She said that Nan's God was a stout widower in a clerical band; whereat Nan would smile dreamily and answer, “Wouldn't it be just ripping if God were?”

At such times Jehane thought Nan stupid.

That Jehane should have been so romantic about marriage was inexplicable, save on the ground that she voiced the passions which her parents had suppressed in themselves.

Her father, Professor Benares Usk, was the greatest living Homeric scholar--a tall, bowed man with a broad beard that flowed down below his watch-chain, a bald and venerable egg-shaped head and a secret habit of taking snuff. He had lost interest in human doings since Greece was trampled by the Roman Eagles. Both he and Mrs. Usk were misty-eyed--they had frictioned off the corners of their personalities in the graveyards of the past; their minds were museums, stored with chipped splendors, the atmosphere of which was stuffy.

Mrs. Usk was an authority on Scandinavian folk-lore--a thin, fine-featured, flat-breasted woman who wore her dresses straight up and down without a bulge. Her soft gray hair was drawn tightly off her forehead and twisted at the back into a hard, round walnut.

Only on Sunday afternoons was the house thrown open to visitors; then Jehane would offer tea to ill-at-ease young bloods, while her father fingered his beard and made awkward efforts to be affable, and her mother, ignoring the guests, sat bolt upright in her chair and slumbered. What a look of relief came into the tanned faces of the men when they caught up their hats and departed. They had come as a duty to see not Jehane but her father; and now they went off to their pleasures. Oh, those Sunday afternoons, how they made her shudder!

Often she marveled at her parents--what had brought them together? To her way of thinking, they knew so little about love and could so easily have dispensed with one another. Like dignified sleepy house-cats, they sat on distant sides of the domestic hearth, heedless of everything save to be undisturbed.--Ah, when she married, life would become intense, ecstatic--one throb of passion!

There was a story current in the 'Varsity of how the Professor cared for Mrs. Usk. He had taken her for a drive in a dog-cart, he sitting in front and she, characteristically, by choice at the back. Deep in thought, he had jolted through country-lanes. Her presence did not occur to him till he had returned to Oxford and had drawn up before his house; then he perceived that she was not there and must have tumbled out. Some hours later, having retraced his journey, he found her by the roadside with a broken leg. For the next three months the greatest living Homeric scholar did penance, wheeling an exacting lady in a bathchair. Doubtless, he planned his great studies of the Iliad as he trundled, and the chair's occupant constructed English renderings of Scandinavian legends. At all events, next autumn they each had a book published.

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The novel opens not with the raft of its title but with a blunt assessment of Jehane's marriage: she wed "blindly on the re-bound," driven by fear of spinsterhood. The narrator immediately establishes a tone of wry social observation, describing Oxford's undergraduates as "too adventurously young" and graduates as "too importantly in earnest." This brisk, ironic voice sets the stage for a story that will shuttle between earnest conversation and theatrical playfulness.

The excerpts reveal a work built on contrasts: the Faun Man's burlesque song about love follows a lyrical passage where a golden woman leans from a lattice window, her hands crossed on her breast. The shift from mock-Cockney verse to idealized imagery is abrupt, suggesting a narrative that refuses to settle into a single register. Water and shadows recur—the river whispering, creeping shadows, the raft itself—hinting at instability beneath the surface of romance.

A Structure of Entrances and Exits

The chapter titles read like a series of arrivals and departures: "Enter Peter and Glory," "Peter to the Rescue," "The Hiding of Ocky Waffles." This theatrical framing is reinforced by scenes that feel staged—the Faun Man playing a mandolin beneath a window, the golden woman framed in the thatch like "a girl on canvas." The narrative often moves by sudden appearances: a character steps into a garden, a voice calls from an unseen room. These entrances are matched by exits that are equally abrupt, as when the Faun Man vanishes into silence after his song. The effect is a story that feels perpetually on the verge of performance, with characters aware of being watched.

Recurring Images of Water and Flight

The raft of the title is never described in the excerpts, but water pervades the novel. The river whispers beyond the hedge; the eights swing by on the river at Oxford; a chapter is titled "On the River." Flight appears in winged birds and rooted trees, in the Faun Man's cry "I'm crying for the moon," and in the golden woman's hesitation at the window—she "rather trust the stairs" than jump. These images create a pattern of longing for escape balanced by a pull toward earth. The epigraph from the Apocrypha—"their virgins had no marriage-songs; and they that could swim did cast themselves into the sea"—frames the entire work as a meditation on those who must improvise survival when conventional structures fail.

Voice and Register as a Shifting Current

The novel's voice moves between registers with little warning. The opening chapter adopts a detached, almost sociological tone: "To bring a man to the point of matrimony, you must catch him unaware and invade his idleness." Later, the Faun Man delivers a music-hall parody attributed to Shelley, complete with Cockney dialect and a jingling mandolin. The golden woman's accent is marked as foreign—"Looard"—and her speech is both teasing and wounded. This polyphony suggests a world where characters try on voices as they try on roles, never quite settling into a single mode of expression. The narrator, too, shifts from ironic commentary to lyrical description, as when the golden woman's hair is "wrapped about her head and forehead, accentuated her vivid paleness."

Movement Between Interior and Exterior Spaces

Scenes alternate between enclosed rooms and open landscapes. The golden woman appears at a lattice window, framed by whiteness; the Faun Man stands in a garden, pollen smirching his face. The Oxford conversations take place in a rectory garden, on the river, returning from a footer match. Chapter titles promise movement: "The Coach-Ride to London," "Tree-Tops," "The Christmas Cab." Yet the excerpts show characters often pausing at thresholds—a window, a garden gate—as if uncertain whether to step through. This hesitation mirrors the novel's central tension: the desire for connection versus the fear of being caught. The raft itself, never seen, may be the ultimate threshold: a makeshift vessel between sinking and reaching land.

Readers should attend to the novel's chapter titles as a map of its emotional geography: they promise journeys, discoveries, and hiding places. The raft is both absent and everywhere—in the river that runs through scenes, in the improvised songs and sudden confessions, in the sense that every character is trying to stay afloat. The excerpts offer no resolution, only a series of arrivals and departures, each one a chance to begin again.

Reading about the raft as precarious love, I remembered my grandmother’s old copy of Lawson’s tales, and how The Raft’s drifting shadows reminded me of the quiet divinations in Aaron Rodd, Diviner — Story, Setting & Ideas. Both books hold water and waiting, and I felt that same hush, as if listening for a name carried on a current.